"This author just loves his passive voice, and his run-on sentences, and stringing together three or four or even five prepositional phrases. I swear, he just wraps them around the main idea of the sentence like a string of Christmas lights on a tree."
Friday, August 20, 2010
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Hmmmm... have you been talking to one my MY editors? (I've got that problem. Been trying to lick it my entire writing life.
Everyone has those problem to some degree. I know I do, too. I've just never seen it on this level.
And I would much rather be editing your stuff right now!
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